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The sort to be shocked and frightened, perhaps put on a paper thin brave front, but seek his brother at very first opportunity, to help cope with the strange new world...?
But yeah, although I already speculated a bunch earlier and have been away from the forums (which seem to have gone very quiet) I'm still hotly anticipating the story. _________________ Ortus Denicalis
I can really agree to that. I also hope he does not have to make it a Chrismas present to us. even if it would be a really sweet one. _________________ Sanity? I threw that away when the world stopped making sense, and it was all the better.
it's 12 and a half pages long, most writers call that a decent Chapter.
I would hug you right now, but It might scar you.
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Ok read it, loved it. Would you like a little Proofreading/ advice from your fans? _________________ Sanity? I threw that away when the world stopped making sense, and it was all the better.
The words ‘Samus Aran’ were entered into the search engine. Samus inhaled and exhaled one time before hitting the Enter button, expecting anything.
*googles it*
2nd image result, a sexy picture of samus coming out of suit.
2nd web page result, "Samus Aran is a Hottie! - thisischris.com"
2nd video result, "Gametrailers.com - Samus Aran Naked! by ..."
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This was especially true of Samus, who over the days had gathered an all-too-vivid picture of what the world was like and what the bounty hunter meant to it.
No kidding.
oh and some helpful proofreading.
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For instance, you’ll notice that no matter how hard you try, you may not recall how to transform yourself into your shape and size of a basketball.”
. I'm assuming that should be "how to transform yourself to the shape and size of a basketball". Or maybe "How to transfrom your shape and size into that of a basketball".
And a missed " after the pre-emptively in
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“I’m en route, now.” Samus responded pre-emptively, in fact, I see a point of
just read the draft (lol, took me long enough) gotta say, pretty good. can't wait to see where the story is going with this whole thing... also, I couldn't help but notice that even your characters are realizing your plot holes. better get out the story-mortar and patch those up (lol, jk). good to see some progress... even if it happened like almost seven months ago... _________________ THIS IS A SIGNATURE!
lol, so i was on youtube as i go on so very often... so yeah, i found these and they got me thinking about the new chapter... anyway, i thought they were funny and wanted to share the LOLZ
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No kidding.